雅思写作如何列举论据
在雅思写作大作文考试中，要求大家针对所给出的题目来表达自己的观点。不仅如此，我们还需要通过一些论证论据来补充说明我们的观点，这样才能让我们整个的写作更有说服力，更加生动。接下来小编来给大家分享一下如何运用这些论据让自己的表达更有说服力，一起来了解一下。
雅思写作如何列举论据
(一)局限于自己或朋友的例子。此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力，由于人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白，个人不代表整体。
例：I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
(二)引用过多数据。太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
(三)中国式的例子。一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试，不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家，过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例：Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
因此，首先考生应了解，举例是一种常见的论述方式，特别在论述某一些比较抽象的话题的时候(比如文化类或跟艺术相关的话题)。但是，并不是每个段落都需要例证法，举例过多或过分牵强会影响文章的正式感，甚至给考官喋喋不休的感觉。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。提醒考生们要注意以下原则：
(一) 要来源于生活，要具有生动的论述效果。不能过于空洞，也不能脱离现时，否则就失去了举例的意义。
(二) 要客观表达。虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式：
for example,/for instance,(后加句子)
Such as/ like (后加词组)
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
雅思写作常见题材归类整理
一、教育类：
A 理论与实践
1 知识和经验的重要性
2 为什么要上大学
3 大学理论和实践课程的关系
4 成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中学习
5 高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年
6 高中生评估和挑战老师，会不会没有尊重没有纪律性
B 男女生问题
7 大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调
8 男女分校的利弊
二、 体育活动类：
1 学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。
2 体育活动造成竞争而非合作是否应该提倡
3 体育盛事是否有利于缓解世界紧张局势，维护世界和平
三、语言类
1 怎样说服他人学习自己母语
2 英语流行的利弊
3 英语和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害
4 机器翻译的推进是否导致不必学外语
四、新闻广告类
1 人们是否只应阅读真实事件或人物
2 是否新闻的真实性和好的工作者的素质
3广告的利弊
五、青少年类
1学生变异行为或态度的原因和改善
2 家庭小孩的惩罚教育是否有效
3 学生压力是否很大
4 父母是否应该限制小孩看电视玩游戏，应该看书学习
5儿童的性格来自先天还是后天培养
6 儿童要学会竞争还是合作
7 课余参加有偿劳动是否提倡
六、老年人类
1 我们这一辈人和上辈人区别的重要方式
2 公司55岁的老人是否应该退休让位给年青人
3 年青人比老年人社会地位高的原因和改善
七、科技与传统类
1 电脑电视录相等是否替代书籍成为传媒和教育的工具
2 电脑的普及是否会取代老师的教育
3 建立博物馆的目的和手段
4 网络的普及影响到生活中家庭成员或是朋友之间的亲密关系
5 科学技术的发展有多大的潜在危机
6 技术发展是否影响娱乐习惯和减少创造力
7 生命工程中的器官移植和试管婴儿等是否不人道
八、金钱类
1 人类登月类似研究浪费金钱和时间么
2 医生应以救人为主,不论病人之贫和利益
1 向朋友借钱会否影响友谊及其原因。
2 花钱买东西或用东西交换的各自好处，你喜欢哪种?
3 体育专业是否应该拿钱比其它重要的专业多
九、国家政府类
1 政府是否应该重视传统和艺术
2 发展中国家是应该致力于发展本国的科技研究还是发展人文教育
3 政府花钱在艺术上还是其他事情上
4 政府财政支持在科学上还是语言商业上
5 你的国家城乡差距大的原因和解决
6 电影教给你其他国家的哪些概况
7 富国是否应该帮助穷国
8 你的国家和其他地方有何相似，怎样相似
10 政府是否该为母亲工作提供帮助和资源
11 国外工作一段时期对个人和国家有何影响
十、变革类
1 发明什么是你的愿望
2 改变家乡的一个重要举措
3 新千年是否世界变化的机会和你希望怎样变化
4人类为什么变得长寿
十一、环境类
1 怎样改进地区公园或国家公园
2 动物做宠物还是人类消费必须品
3 化学农业和经济作物的趋势对土地和动物的影响
4 该不该保护野生动物资源
5 是否应该关闭动物园
6小轿车是否利大于弊
7 吸烟是否应该非法化
8 一个国家和城市的环境保护是应该由个人，团体(公司)和政府来共同承担
十二、犯罪类
1 罚款是不是制止犯罪的必要因素
2 对杀人犯的刑罚
3 犯罪者应入狱还是再教育.再适应
4 年轻女人犯罪率升高的原因和举措。
5 该不该亲自制止犯罪、正当防卫的限度
6 青少年犯罪与父母教育
7 住宅的保安由政府还是建筑商控制负责
十三、个人看法类
1 拥有土地后怎样运用
2 喜欢亲自动手还是喜欢机器
3 独处还是和朋友相处
4 玩游戏是否一定要赢
5 安乐死是否会合法化
6游客是否遵从当地风俗
7 堕胎应该提倡还是非人道
8 对现在工作压力大闲暇时间少的看法
9名人是否因隐私付出代价及是否应该拥有此权
10工作需要的转变和自身适应
雅思写作9分范文：汽油价格和控制交通污染
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution. What extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think more effective?
Bad traffic and increasing pollution are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe. To combat such problems, government encourages companies to mark up gas price in an effort to decrease car use and cut down waste gas. However it may temporarily alleviate the problem, but is doubtfully the optimal solution.
First of all, consumers and economy would be victimized by such measures. The number of cars in a country directly depends on the proportion of the population affluent enough to own cars. As a result, raises in gas price could invoke hard feelings among this segment of people but would not drastically change their behavior in using cars. Even if the number of cars on road is reduced due to higher gas cost, this is not the best way to solve traffic problems. Such policy would hurt the auto industry, place higher costs on current and prospect car owners, and undermine the economy of a nation. In the long run, the final way out could be the construction of better roads and more effective use of available transport facilities.
Secondly, there is evidence that waste gas from cars is not the leading cause of air pollution. The culprit may be the discharge of polluting substances into the atmosphere due to the rapidly growing manufacturing industry. As a result, reduction of the number of cars would not return us a blue sky and fresh air. We could better handle this problem if we could increase control over industrial waste discharge and adopt more environmental friendly materials and production equipment.
Finally, other measures like the application of cheaper and cleaner energy resources could also be a better solution. For example, we now have the ability to make cell-powered or even solar-powered cars. Such energy is completely clean and plentiful. However we still have a very long way to go to turn such technologically possible into affordable and practical products.
To conclude, it is not the best way to control traffic and pollution by increasing gas price because such action will hurt consumers and economy without achieving what it is aimed for. Measures such as construction of better transport facilities and development of new energy resources could be more effective solutions.
雅思写作9分范文点评：警察佩戴枪支
Unlike most countries, the police in the United Kingdom do not normally carry guns. Some people think it leaves the citizens unprotected, while others believe that this practice reduces the overall violence in society. Discuss both views and use your own experience and evidence.
Unlike most countries, the police in the United Kingdom do not normally carry guns. Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected, while others believe that this practi c e reduces the overall violence in society.Police having guns however is an issue secondary to criminals having guns. (45words)
结构分析： 2+ 1 ’ 模式，最后一句为主题句，明确地表达了自己的观点。但是，前两句的问题很严重，即照抄了题目。(这可能是我和老外没有沟通好，在他所写的所有例文中都出现了类似的情况，大家千万不要学!!!)
Because criminals usually have access to guns, police officers need them in order to control crime.If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police. (98words)
For places that are not able to, or are unwilling to control this availability of guns to criminals, police have no choice.Countries with weak or ineffective gun laws, or countries bordering such countries, like Mexico which has strong gun laws, but virtually no way to prevent them from being smuggled over the border from the U.S., need a police force that is not only armed, but is armed better than the criminals. This ‘domestic arms race’ is the fate of any country that does not realize that civilians have no need of being armed and should have no access to weapons whatsoever.(103words)
The root of the problem is embarrassingly corrupt governments and ineffective half-measures taken to control the circulation of guns, which allows criminals to easily come into possession of guns.Nations around the world should hope to someday reach the point where their police force can afford not to carry guns and still be effective. (54words)
文章后几段结构比较清晰，未加点评，红色部分为段落主题句。
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