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  在托福考试中写作26分+已经是非常不错的分数.今天,小编召集了写作26分+的童鞋让他们传授给你托福学习的秘密!来看看吧!

  托福写作如何练习?来看这份写作26分+经验汇总!

  以下同学均获得托福写作26分+

  01

  刘同学 武汉大学 大三 托福写作29分

  在托福写作的训练过程中,增加语料的输入,在计时环境中加强对语言的使用是非常重要的。

  在XDF托福写作老师的帮助下,平日加强练习写作的频率,保证两天一篇作文的训练量,有助于在考场能迅速将自己平日反复训练的好词句得心应手地用于考场作文上。把握综合写作和独立写作的给分要求,针对性地写出适于拿高分的作文。

  对于综合写作,在前3分钟快速浏览文章的过程中,快速记下对象和其中的三个理由或理论,然后针对这些观点着重听听力内容,尽可能多的将听力内容全部呈现,这部分对句式要求并不严格,只需要观点明确并且适当替换单词,避免过度重复即可。

  对于独立写作,在平日里积累了大量训练后,对每一个话题都会比较熟悉,按照独立写作的框架,给出论点和论据,加以人物事例论证即可(最好有自己的同时也有名人事例)。

  施同学 武汉大学 大二 托福写作28分

  02

  我把经验分为综合写作和独立写作来说。

  综合写作只需要对比阅读材料与听力材料的论点相对之处,不需要加入自己的观点的。如果加入了自己的观点反而会显得累赘。官方要求说是150-225字,但是实际写下来肯定是会超过225个词的。

  独立写作重要的是要有详尽的细节。实际考试的时候最好是能写到450字左右。写作最重要的就是不能有单词和语法错误,一定要在最后留出5分钟的时间好好检查一遍自己写的文章。在这么短的时间内写出的文章难免不会出错,而过多的细微的语法和单词拼写错误会使最终的写作得分降低一到两分甚至会更多,因为检查是十分重要的。

  03

  郑同学 华中科技大学 大四 托福写作28分

  写作是托福考试的最后一项,我拿到了28分。我想XDF老师提出的多写多练,不要怕小错误的建议起到了很大的作用。

  以前写作时,总是在一些细节上耗费脑力,生怕哪个细节语法或拼写出错,但XDF的写作老师详细给我们介绍了作文评分标准,只要不影响阅读理解,一些细小的错误是不会扣分的,但字数太少的文章通常会被认为是语言能力不足,所以考场上我基本算是放飞自我,畅所欲言,最后的大写作写到了接近600字,不出意外的拿到了理想分数。

  张同学 华中科技大学 大三 托福写作26分

  04

  说到托福作文,我并没有太多时间准备,但是还是拿到了比较不错的分数,因为我在新东方的托福写作老师何铮老师曾经讲过一种看一句范文后自己在脑中重构一遍后与其比对的方法,我把这种方法与键盘打字相结合使用(打字速度慢也是字数少的一个原因),看一句托福作文书后,用键盘快速打下来,然后比对比对少了什么,在考前我一直重复这个方法,而不是盲目写新作文,这样在最后考试的时候,独立作文写了493个词。

  05

  朱同学 武汉大学 大三 托福写作27分

  关于托福写作,开头非常重要,一定不要在开头犯下任何语法和拼写错误,要尽可能用优美的语句来引入话题,这样可以给考官一个高水平的印象。

  平时背一下各种话题的常用开头会很有用,但是不要用各种范文的开头,可以自己给各种话题写一个属于自己的完美开头,这样子不会给考官一种套用的感觉,而且也会节省很多引入话题思考的时间。

  写作要尽可能把例子详细,不要一笔带过。越是详细的例子,越容易用到好的词汇,这样可以画龙点睛,展示自己的词汇量。如果最后写完了,检查的时间不够了,比如只有1分钟了,一定详细检查开头,每一段的主题句和结尾,不可以有拼写和语法错误。

  平时要多练习写作,必须用电脑打字来练习,打字速度快能够为你在考试中节省大量的时间来思考和展开。虽然官方对字数的要求是300字以上,但是我建议最好写到500词,这样能够展示自己的熟练度,也可以展示更多丰富的内容。

  平时一定要多背单词,不要仅限于托福词汇,要在各个话题中尽可能扩展词汇量,这样阅读是能省下单词题的时间;口语中词汇呼之欲出,不会卡壳;在写作中也能精准表达自己的意思,使用高级的词汇。

  梁同学 武汉大学 大三 托福写作27分

  06

  在写作方面,我也没有记背套路,而是谨记,写作是为了表达观点。如何准确的抓住题意、有逻辑的思考、清晰的表达、合理的回答问题才是重点。

  考试时文章我采用了三段式,开头明确写出了观点,段落中写出推理过程,段尾简单提出意见。当然,我的运气也比较好,考察的内容刚好可以用我在学校学到的有关经济学原理的知识解释。剩下的就是水到渠成一气呵成的事情。当然,在写完之后,还是应该仔细检查,避免语法错误。

  托福写作内容如何瘦身

  一、选择比较实际实用的单词,不用空洞的词汇

  1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

  When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying

  lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

  这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

  2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

  Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help

  their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this

  point in time.

  “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not

  have the options that young people have now.

  二、尽量减少重复,不要太啰嗦

  1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

  large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

  更简洁的表达方式为:

  My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

  2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:

  My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his

  parents’ farm.

  这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’

  farm.

  三、相关语法要选择最恰当的表达方式

  选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下,推荐几种考生们在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

  1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:.

  The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study

  engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

  从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to

  study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

  My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on

  the farm.

  2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构,例如下面的句子:

  There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day.

  It was hard work for my grandfather.

  可以改为:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every

  day.

  更简洁的句式为:

  My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

  3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

  Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located 100 kilometers from

  the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

  简介的表达方式为:

  The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest

  university.

  4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:

  In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was

  mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

  本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s

  family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:

  In the fall, my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed

  and stacked the hay.

  5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:

  My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his

  school friends.

  Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:

  My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

  6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:

  Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet

  the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university

  degree.

  两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:

  Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational

  expenses,let alone pay for a university degree.

  简单并不代表没有难度,一篇好的托福作文,必须逻辑清晰、词汇和句式运用恰当。如果考生对新托福写作备考中的长句没有太大的把握,那么不妨拆成更有把握的短句,一样能获得高分。

  托福范文:运气在成功里的作用

  【题目】

  "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

  【范文】The Role of Luck in Success

  It has been said that when people succeed, it is because of hard work and that luck has nothing to do with success. Although I believe that hard work is very important and is the surest way to success for most people, I must disagree with this statement. It cannot be denied that luck often plays an important role in success. For example, many important discoveries have been made by accident. There have been many cases of researchers and inventors making major breakthroughs while they were actually trying to solve another problem or create a different device.

  Furthermore, there is something to be said for simply being in the right place at the right time-perhaps meeting someone by chance who can offer a good job or rare opportunity. And of course, there are the rare examples of gamblers and lottery winners who beat the odds and achieve sudden and unexpected success.

  While the influence of luck cannot be ignored, this is not to say that one should depend on it and ignore the value of hard work. If one is willing to work hard, I believe that success will eventually be achieved, with or without the added benefit of luck. Moreover, hard work is often an essential ingredient of luck because it enables one to take advantage of a lucky encounter. If the scientist has not worked hard to develop his knowledge and skills, he may not recognize that lucky breakthrough when it comes along. Therefore, my suggestion is not to count on luck to bring you success. Instead, work hard and keep your eyes open for that lucky opportunity.

  【译文】运气在成功里所扮演的角色

  有人说一个人会成功是因为努力,而运气和成功则是一点关系也没有。虽然我相信努力很重要,而且对大部分的人来说,努力是成功最可靠的方法,可是我不得不反对这种说法。能否成功,运气扮演着一个很重要的角色,这是不可否认的事实。例如,很多重要的发现都是在偶然情况下发生的。有很多实例表明,有重大突破的研究人员和发明家,原本是要试图解决其他问题或是发明别的仪器。

  而且,仅仅是天时地利这方面也有一些关系——也许是偶然碰到能提供好的工作和珍贵机会的人。当然也有极少数赌徒和彩票得主得到突如其来、意想不到的成功。

  尽管运气的影响力不容忽视,但也不表示人就应该完全靠运气,而忽视努力的价值。如果一个人愿意努力,不论有没有运气额外的帮助,我相信终究还是会成功。此外,因为努力能让人充分利用幸运的机会,所以努力通常也是运气的必要因素。如果科学家没有努力培养自己的知识和技巧,那么当某个幸运的突破出现时,他可能也看不出来。因此,我建议大家不要指望运气能带来成功。相反地,应该努力,并随时注意不要错过任何好机会。

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