如何提升雅思写作水平之语法篇

时间：2020-05-07 11:39:01 楚薇0由分享

想要雅思作文得高分，就要掌握好语法的内容，下面小编给大家分享一个提高语法水平的干货！

语法自测

我写了这么几个句子，请各位看官自己找找错误(数据随意编的，请勿当真~)：??

1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???

2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.??

3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??

4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.??

5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.??

6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.??

7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?70%?in?1981?to?80%?in?2001.??

8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.??

9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???

答案?

1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???缺少and/so连接词??

2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.???

比较对象错误???应该是....better?than?that?in?urban?areas.??

3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??

动词数量问题(更深层次是非谓语错误)???sit和talk都加ing???

4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.???

最简单粗暴但是很多同学犯的错误???benefit改成beneficial??????

5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.???

逻辑主语的问题，逗号的后面应该改成???.......,?parents?need?to?supervise?students?at?home.??

6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.???government是可数名词哦???

7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?40%?in?1981?to?50%?in?1991.???40%和50%后面各加一个of?the?total?school?spending(来源自剑8T2T1)???8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.???reduce表示的并不是具体数字的下降，改成简单的decline/decrease/drop即可??

9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???不要使用定从去描述句子，你可以用with连接?

总结

脑袋里面暂时就想到了这九个小句子，如果你觉得可以轻松找到8个句子全部的语法错误所在，那么理论上来说，你应该是具备了6.5及6.5分以上分数的语法水平，请注意我的措词，仅仅是语法水平，但这个语法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5个句子你可以比较轻松的找到问题，那么6分的语法水平应该是差不多的，这些问题是找我批改的作文里面最容易出现的一些简单问题(除了句子5稍微有一点点难)，避免这些可以帮助写作6.5分以下的同学提高0.5分左右，当然，还有单词的拼写、可数or不可数(这个其实对我来说也是烦死人=?=)以及主谓一致等小问题，都要尽可能的避免。原来有个学生听了我的课，跑去跟助教说“Panda老师说了，语法错误是没关系的，错了也不减分!”我听到助教的反馈之后表示很无奈，因为我的原话是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文里面犯的所有错误控制在3~4个，那么考官如果大发慈悲or眼神不太好，其实并不会减分”。我也发现有一些同学是只会听到对他们有利的话，至于是不是有条件or前提，他们不管=?=那么如果是要求7or7以上的写作分数，请你尽量保证整篇文章不要出现语法错误吧亲。

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